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Friday, September 9, 2016

The creepest night at the musem

... The young ghostbusters by ...Sep 8, 2016 9:53:46 AM.jpg
Plop! Ahh!  What was that? It was just a drip of water then the was a mighty roar Ahhhh run. Look there is a dinosaur quick there is a hiding spot close the door hide are you there yes where are you hiding I am under the bed ok now lets see if the monster is not there 321 Ahhhhh!!!!!!!!! Run!!!!! Are you there Chris yes I am down stairs i’m Coming down ok said Chris. and there was a  big Snake and a humongous Trex than we seen a moa and it was big but there was a massive bird and it swept down and eate the moa than we seen a New Zealander and it almost killed the moa but me and Chris saved the moa And when he saved the moa a big trex swallowed a spear and he found us hiding under the bones and muscles than I looked out of the bones to check if the dinosaur is out there and it was   not out there and I looked outside than there was a big Pac Man and he was trying to eat us but me and Chris found a sword and killed Pakman. Once we killed him he relive into a ghost and ghostbusters came and sucket up the ghost. Than I Went to antarctica and went on the sled and done a flip.

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  2. Wow that is very good. I like the way you pot lots of adjectives, it makes the story go boom. The helpful thing is that you made the story with your creativity.

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